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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-08-11 07:54 PM

These are such confusing feelings
and my thoughts are so unclear,
you seem so very far away
but yet in my heart still near.

You try to say that you don't care
but that's not what your eyes say,
I can feel your heart reach out to mine
when your looking at me that way.

Even now when you say goodbye
you still place a kiss upon my cheek,
and although so much time has passed
it still makes my heart grow so very weak.

I sit alone just thinking of you
wishing that I somehow understood,
but the answers~they just won't come....
Oh Lord, how I wish they would.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-08-11 08:58 PM

bittersweet, sincere words GS...
if only we could wish it all away...
or write our own happy endings.
write it out...find release in your words
heal in your rhymes
jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-11 11:23 PM

GentleSpirit~
Stirring~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2001-08-11 11:57 PM

That in between time is when we feel so helpless and out of control. Lots of emotions here vividly portrayed in lovely images.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-08-12 08:35 PM

nice, very very nice.

i loved it tho it was sad, well that's prolly y i loved it!

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 08-12-2001).]

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-12 08:39 PM

You have created a very soft verse of lost love, on the outside, but still very real on the inside. I hope the hurt will ease with each passing day. He hears you.

Sincerely,
Regina

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