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Open Poetry #15

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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2001-08-11 07:34 PM

i have gorged five minutes to its fullest, whipping thumb prints to cotton, going threw and threw the hall,
caught in the dull glare of 30 years, stunned at the bare, blaming of the blue,
holding the fort down in obtrusive altering, not dareing the china, not asking for white,
motioning for ever clear, and fresh rooms,
adorned with moments, forgetting the copper pipes.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-08-11 10:30 PM

RedHeartAngryBraids~
So wonderful to see your gentle thoughts upon the pages~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

2 posted 2001-08-12 03:58 AM

thank you
i will read you soon.
i have been so busy
i am looking forward to your marvelous words, ringing chime on porch of talk,
so sweet and aromaic,
thank you for reading such a dull
title, i know,
rather elusive to the facts, yeah?
kindly, amelia

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Rindercella
Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 64
La La Land

3 posted 2001-08-13 05:30 PM

Oh, I like your name and this poetry.
Very different and quite unique are your thoughts.

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-08-13 05:34 PM

some unique imagery here..an enjoyable read...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-08-13 05:59 PM

I enjoyed reading this creative poem, very much!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-13 07:00 PM

again, I have always loved your view of the world. . .

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-08-13 07:04 PM

I love your way with words! Thanks for sharing your magical pen.

Maree

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