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Open Poetry #15

rain said "hello" to the talcom hand

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2001-08-11 04:45 PM

A talcom hand
twined with the sands
from deserts dwellen land.
Ruminates,
my heart and mind,
stunned, and glowing
deep behind my aching chest.

For pleading of rest
has brought a simple time
worth troubles set aside.

And taken by
a nimble sky
to waters crest
and oceans tide
I've turned to cradle in my eye
the dusks
enduring ever bride.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-11 04:52 PM

Amelia? I have missed you so...the title alone is pure poetry, and you are not just a poet, but a mystic spirit woman...Please stay to grace us with your beautiful thoughtprints....the last line is a fabulous line of spirituality. I wish I could I could see the world through your eyes.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-11 05:09 PM

Nice writing Redheart...James

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-11 06:34 PM

I must echo serenity's thoughts. . . I have always found that your words make me think the most profound things. . . this is no exception. . .

thank you for this. . . and welcome back. . .

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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

4 posted 2001-08-11 07:30 PM

thank you
all

[This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 08-11-2001).]

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

5 posted 2001-08-11 07:32 PM

thank you all so much,
serenity, you ....... so ,,,, dear, i feel the same way, when i read you, i am

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2001-08-11 07:53 PM

O am I glad to see you on these pages again, where have you been? It so soooo good to read you again. Please keep writing and I'll keep reading. The ending lines just blew me away. Excellent writing from you Amelia. (beautiful name btw)

I enjoyed as always

Maree

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