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Life's Mystery Unfolds
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Life's Mystery Unfolds |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
People come and people go Some we never really know They pass us on by As we sit wondering why Others leave their mark With a brilliant spark On the surface of your heart Branding each little part No one can explain True friendship's vein How some of us are blessed A little more than the rest We need not understand Why they offer their hand Acceptance is a must To establish our trust Just enjoy the unity Of the bond you'll never see In our hearts it slowly grows As love continually flows It's a mystery of life Easing daily strife To know someone cares In a way that is rare All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I believe you've touched me very much with this penning~ 'We need not understand Why they offer their hand' Beautifully said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
No one deserves a friend like you do, Jennifer, and not many have extended themselves to others and this forum as you have in grace, style and dignity. Few know the beautiful woman inside of you and hopefully they see it in your words for all to read. I'm proud of you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love your thoughts in this LoneWolf ... establishing trust and accepting wonderful friendships with those we encounter through life ... it's an amazing thing when we really take the time and think about it. Thank you for these lovely ponderings, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Lone Wolf! You have touched my heart with this! 'To know someone cares' indeed that is the key! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: the quiet reach of a hand, a meeting of fingers, a beginning of many things.... well done, LW... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
We need not understand Why they offer their hand a wonderful message upon which to build your verse! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
LW, very gentle smile, the depths of your thoughts are only as beautiful as the words you write so very well |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge: Thank you much. I just try to write what I see and know. Friendship is something I know very well. For I have been very blessed in that area. Kathleen: You are very kind, sweetheart. You know more than most, that what you read and see here is me. Anyone who wants to get to know me only need read my poetry. It's all in there. I appreciate your kind words. My heart is smiling big at making you proud of me. I love you! Kit: It is truly amazing, I agree. You're welcome for my pondering. I'm happy you enjoyed them! Cindi: Thank you! Sunshine: Reaching out to another in their time of need takes a special person who is kind, patient, and loving to really take the time to understand. The rewards for that are endless in my eyes. Thank you. VAS: That is the key. No need to ask why, just accept it. Logan: Thank you very much. You have read a lot of my writing since your arrival and I think you have seen the real me in there. For that, I thank you kind sir. All writing comes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have grown rather doubtful of friendships recently and this seems to provide a much needed alternative to my negative outlook... thank you |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this deserves another spin... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I, for one, count you as a friend and, from the looks of it, you are wealthy in friendship at Passions Finally fixed :) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Those two lines everyone quoted say it all, and without trust, there is nothing. You did this so well, just a wonderful read and write. Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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