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Descending Night
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Descending Night |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Descending night softly wrapping with sweet embrace, solitude’s moment bring forth the haunting face. A face which comes in those rare times, setting the soul with peaceful rhyme. Tis not the skin covering the planes, putting all others in moroseful shame. Nor the caress of silken hair, even the eyes showing deep care. A smile which lifts full ripe lips, heady wine upon the soul sips. Haunting the mind till more reveals, shimmering from mists, my heart it steals. Soft fingertips caress with the wind, letting me know, you have come once again. When I know I have you there, only then will I take the dare. Letting the breeze carry to ancient fields, walking the path with what it reveals. My body may be, my mind is not, of the actuality which is times lot. Across the portal you pull what’s me lost in the mists of sweet eternity All of this and so much more as the descending night opens loving door. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That is why I love the night...you are such a romantic, a beautiful write, Logan...reads like a dream. loved it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan-- "Across the portal you pull what’s me lost in the mists of sweet eternity" The whole poem is lovely..but these lines took my heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Line by line you've drawn the skein to bring us in once and again [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-10-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, each time you transport me to that better place, your works are so special This stanza especially moved me "My body may be, my mind is not, of the actuality which is times lot. Across the portal you pull what’s me lost in the mists of sweet eternity All of this and so much more as the descending night opens loving door." Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"A smile which lifts full ripe lips, heady wine upon the soul sips." "My body may be, my mind is not, of the actuality which is times lot. Across the portal you pull what’s me lost in the mists of sweet eternity" Beautiful Logan! A wonderful flow to these lovely sentiments. You've captured a wonderful mood in this piece, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Soft fingertips caress with the wind, letting me know, you have come once again. When I know I have you there, only then will I take the dare. Letting the breeze carry to ancient fields, walking the path with what it reveals. My body may be, my mind is not, of the actuality which is times lot. Across the portal you pull what’s me lost in the mists of sweet eternity All of this and so much more as the descending night opens loving door. ======================================= oh my...OH SIGH  Logan...this is enchanting and lovely what a romantic beauty youve penned here.. the imagery is delightful.. and the emotions are written with passion, devotion and anticipation... you should kiss your muse for this one *smile* very very nice write poet sir  I know no one is to blame |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Okay, who is she??? Smiling, Cor |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I've been away from the walls of Passions much to long...and this beautiful write shows me once again how much I love the sweet lure of poetic rhyme...enchanting write Logan, you have a gift...and you share it well~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Logan~ wow this is sooooo gorgeous...... I enjoyed the soft flow |
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