Open Poetry #15 |
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Lover of Mine |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Lover of mine, I don't forget the touch of fire you placed on me. Remember days when first we met? Am I the only one who sees? Lover of mine, though not, in fact because you lay with someone else completely disregard our pact you leave me lonely on the shelf. Lover of mine, at least at night when darkness falls I come to you through dreams, through maze of shadowed light Tis time, my lover, come unto. Hold not yourself away from me Through merging we shall both be free. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A really well-done piece..... You have wonderfully manage to control the tone of sadness there and mingle it with some hope and yearning..... Thank you....... ************************ "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra Many of us can relate to this writing. But remember, life does go on. Well written. "Lover of mine, though not, in fact because you lay with someone else completely disregard our pact you leave me lonely on the shelf" |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
It is hard to let go of a lover. You have expressed your feelings well Sandra, with this beautiful heart-felt poem. Hugs to you, ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, life does continue. . . but. . . *sigh*. . . wonderful writing my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Beautiful and full of sorrow... yes, we do continue, but it's never the same... Love, Elise |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well done, shows a deep sense of loss, and yearning. A great poem this was. To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
More than haunting memories, the soul of your words breathes deep with passion! Greatly enjoyed! Willie |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wonderous dreams of those we only really need in pillow softness. Seems the rest is barbed wire, thus making us long for more. Maybe another will arrive to make every moment Dreamy! I hope so. Sincerely, Regina |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Catalinamoon, "I don't forget" Oh so very true...we never forget. I love this line: "through maze of shadowed light" The words in this poem are so very poignant, I can definitely relate. Powerful read! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
you are a spinner of magic words, a web of emotions that touch all who read! This is bittersweet and leaves me with the desire to taste it again! ![]() The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Seems so difficult for the one who waits on the shelf. To die a slow death of Co-dependency. It is sadder than the betrayal of trust and commitment. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, but when you think of the face, and with a shock, realize it is blurred and becoming indistinct..at that point you know you are healing...very gentle smile, hang tough |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
Everyone who touches us receives part of ourselves, and everything we give makes us either stronger or weaker. Take strength in knowing you are always, always true to yourself. |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
catalinamoon, I really liked this ![]() "through maze of shadowed light" I loveeee that line ![]() TaraB |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah so sad You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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