Burning Meadows of my Mind

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Open Poetry #15

Burning Meadows of my Mind

xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

0 posted 2001-08-09 07:59 PM

I fell back forward and almost down
In pools of respects I seem to drown
Standing alone in the crowd
Quiet Regret, my Aplogy loud
Never making a sound
Lost in the Circle of Life, but along the narrow roads of Deceit I'm found
Stumbling into another Dark Cloud
I'd open my heart and hope some pain falls out.
Lingering in Dark Halls of Mistakes
Spending days half awake
But alseep
Caressed by a Weak Need
To be Free
Disappearing
Deeper within a Flawless Breeze
Away from a Fake Reality
My Blinded eyes long to see
Somewhere in this Fate called Change
Discovering
An " I Love You" could be associated with my name
Without Shame
Smiles that never fade
Searching Directions for The Way
To that Beautiful Day.

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

1 posted 2001-08-09 08:41 PM

"My Blinded eyes long to see
Somewhere in this Fate called Change
Discovering
An " I Love You" could be associated with my name
Without Shame
Smiles that never fade
Searching Directions for The Way
To that Beautiful Day."

Maybe the way to the beautiful day is inside of you. Just take a left at your pancreas, head north, hitch a ride on a blue colored vein, and get off at the station inside of your heart.

Thanks for sharing your poem. I really enjoyed it.
-Samia

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