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A Fountain of Day Care
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A Fountain of Day Care |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
A Fountain of Day Care Within the park across the way Water from a fountain playing Dress up Smooths such a sheen of imitation That even the concrete underneath Seems soft. Faster, As if to say the days-a-slip, It mocks the chatter Stockings make Networking with slacks and skirts. Brick, after reporting The sound of heels hurrying to work, Instantly forgets The dissonance of city life, And lying back, Calmly, patiently awaits The symphony of fingertips. RMW |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ahh...wise are you that sees what it is that makes a fountain's sparkle come to life... well done Sir... all the sounds, the feel, the imagery... well done indeed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob--Now I must go find a park, a park with a fountain, for you have made it sound wonderful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
painted well... and lessons perhaps in how to approach our own days and lives... as usual.. a treasure to read... |
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