Open Poetry #15 |
Precious Ordinary |
Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
PRECIOUS ORDINARY --- I'm remembering that warm evening we sat together on the swing nestled in familiar years of union we looked out over sloping lawn too neat these days with no more babies to play it into comfort you had loved me into languidness and I was thankful that the lifting up of wine to mouth required no effort I recall that evening often and I savor it for all its ordinary because it was the last we were allowed [This message has been edited by Constance (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Constance~ My goodness ... this is beautifully moving~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
The simplest moments in time are oft' cherished as divine. what a great memory. peace love and understanding...wpwpoet |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Marge-glad you enjoyed this. sigh. and thanks for the hug too. wpwpoet-you are so right.thanks. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Life's precious moments are often our most unencumbered ones indeed... Nicely said, Constance.. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This has a haunting feel to it, Constance, as if one should ask, "what happened" for the tinge of sadness that is woven into the last line.... well done, m'dear.... |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Nan-yes indeed, precious and sweet, and over too soon. Lady In White-very perceptive of you once again. It is as you guessed, and those simple times that much more fondly recalled when there can be no more of them. Thanks for commenting. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Constance--I like the way you spoke so simply of something so big...much impact in this! Hugs! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
There is something about this ordinary that is very splendid and as I grow older I am reminded of how much more I appreciate the simple moments. Thank you. |
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