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And Lines Appear |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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AND LINES APPEAR Speech, Speech where did it go? I write, I write I speak no more I fear my mouth will let it out a burst, a blast of inner self seething, steaming, boiling to be free pent up too long controlled controlled? But write I can the pen’s in charge the ink can flow so very slow it will not explode (It does not know) And lines appear as words sometimes to soothe in rhyme the angry beast But on it goes from heart a-boil and head of steam from soul turmoiled as yet controlled? Speech, Speech where did it go? I write, I write the ink must flow . . . "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry [This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 08-04-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I know just what you mean, you just gotta keep writing! good one, Krawdad! |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I understand this very well - the pen can speak when the tongue could only scream. Well written.  |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good!!! Oh how I can relate LOL Remember to the ones that matter Never forget the words... Don't hide true self Thank You |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Krawdad- Wow! Very cool write! "I write, I write the ink must flow . . ." Indeed, it must! Love this! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I like your style of writing and I think I understand the need you've written about. |
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