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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
I wanna make a person bleed and beg on their knees for another chance at life I wanna have the choice to inflict pain on others to heal pain of my own I wanna have sex in public to entertain myself and others maybe even make a few stomachs turn I wanna pleasure myself then attempt suicide, fail and try again newspapers,radios, and tv's keep my mind at ease and I wish to destroy them all, the creator's of this disturbed mind. |
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sean mani Junior Member
since 2001-08-06
Posts 27 |
hey...wow, ur mom is altogether different...such intense and deviant from all the other poems from here. what i can get from readin this poem is that u want to be maybe different from the public...or maybe u already are...u are tired of life? or u want to challenge its limits. maybe u have been hurt, and maybe u want life to be fair and inflict pain on others...ne way ne how...such deviant thoughts is what makes ur poem different and 'wow' to read...look for my poem comin within a short time...its called 'December's Demise' i already have a few poems published here under poetry 15 and its called 'revelation to december' adn 'september 29' hope u like readin em...cya |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
hey thanx, glad you liked my poem. I'll b sure to keep my eyes open for your work. I must say yes I've been hurt in many different ways and sometimes I do feel like I want to see how far I can go but being the type of person I am I never act things as violent and vulgar as this out, I just write about them. I'm glad you liked it though and thanx for reading. Take care, Trina |
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