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Transition |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Transition. Each tear drop from my sorrow Falls on the hidden seed below Begins the transition of growth Showing in the beauty of spring As the sunlight penetrates the wing Of the waiting butterfly of love I shall find then another tear and another Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nicely written, tears do serve a purpose, yes! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Let them all out, Daniel and be cleansed by their release. Nicely done. All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Daniel, this made me think of butterflies and I love them and new beginnings and hope...all of that, thank you. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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