Open Poetry #15 |
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How Fragile These Moments |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
How Fragile These Moments Virginia Salter out in the darkness a barking calls all to attention night stands ready with all it hides from one’s eyes depth of blackness lessened only by spots of light in the distant sky and a sliver of moon passes by a whistle’s heard it’s the wind in the trees a moan has stirred I fall to my knees a prayer on my lips “Please keep me nigh beneath your wings as the villains vie.” I rise to shut out the night one door, then two I quietly reach just beyond my furtive steps my eyes straining into the depth of ebony that stares at me from beyond the glow that winks through kitchen window onto just inches of lanai how fragile my moments be if only you were here with me © August 26. 2000 |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I rise to shut out the night one door, then two I quietly reach just beyond my furtive steps my eyes straining into the depth -------------- how fragile my moments be if only you were here with me ----------------------- A very wonderful and powerful images......and the sad tone of this blended softly with the images of the night and darkness makes it all more touching and deep... I quite enjoyed it..... Thank you ****************************** "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thanks, lots, MEM, you have given wonderful encouragement, so glad you enjoyed! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Virginia this was a very well done piece, and the images you created were excellent, you had me right to the end. Great job! ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you, Mysteria. Your words mean a great deal to me. Some people have sure been praying well, I'm getting bits and pieces of work finally to help me make it through summer. Now, if I'm supposed to leave sub-teaching, I need one of the private sector jobs to come through that will be full-time employment. Though I have much less time to get on here, at least I might be able to pay for my internet service...sounds like an oxymoron, doesn't it. ![]() |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"how fragile my moments be if only you were here with me" lovely, sweetly says it all! |
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