I'll always return to thee

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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-08-08 09:26 AM

Time and again I find myself thinking
At times of the most pleasant unaware
Thy memory savored in such drinking
As sure as touches as if I were there
More real than distant glimpse of lonely stars
From thy storybooks with their cold appeal
Thus the random thoughts of all that thou art
Make ever something impossible, real
When I have journeyed so far asunder
And times find myself lost upon the way
There seems always paths left to discover
Leading me further and further astray

No matter how far, from earth, sky or sea
I know that I’ll always return to thee

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-08 09:27 AM

A promise that I would bet will be well kept! Enjoyed, PK!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-08 09:37 AM

good grief...your gonna have all us women here swooning

beautiful as always

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-08-08 12:21 PM

Thy memory savored in such drinking
As sure as touches as if I were there
More real than distant glimpse of lonely stars
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When I have journeyed so far asunder
And times find myself lost upon the way
There seems always paths left to discover
Leading me further and further astray

No matter how far, from earth, sky or sea
I know that I’ll always return to thee
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What can I say that I havent said before...
you just do this so very, very, well. Classic PK poetry,
I'll swoon & sigh with the rest...but more so admiring the level of talent.
jm

wont you sing me your poetry
wont you take me to your home
wont you be for me forever
so Ill never be alone
youre my dream, its a beautiful thing

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

4 posted 2001-08-08 12:30 PM

A sonnet! And enjoyable too. Very good.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-08-08 02:52 PM

No matter how far, from earth, sky or sea
I know that I’ll always return to thee

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Lovely......

A really wonderful piece

Thank you
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2001-08-08 03:20 PM

this is beautiful & make it look so easy....BUT...it's not!!! helen

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-08-08 04:28 PM

these words somehow gave me a lot of comfort today..thank you

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-08-08 04:57 PM

Nice writing...James

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