Open Poetry #15 |
Rhopalic Madness.....Wedge Verse |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
~Rhopalic Madness~ me... I bravely meet challenge happily to compose rhopalics successfully wedge verses following complicated methodology prove very cerebral...difficulty initiating irritability now seeking simplistic literature alleviating uncharacteristic hypersensitivity yet finding refreshing tranquility ineffectual idealogically am seeing competent psychologist professionally a speedy remedy necessary for mental sanity of crazy me... ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
QUICK ... somebody get the dictionary ... Vicky's lost it ! Girl ... time to step away from the blackboard and return to your seat. It will be recess time soon ... and there are nice people waiting to see you on the playground~ Oh .... you were ON the playground ... got a little dizzy on the versy-go-round, huh ? That's okay ... teacher will be good to you ! You are the challenge-taker extraordinaire~ Hands down ! Winner take all ! A+ Love ya' ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, Can I copy your homework? LOL You are a little crazy woman! but that's why I love ya! Awsome work! I have to get started on mine...Oh no! I think I'm going to be late for class again! LOL Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A+ is for sure - I love this - Now how am I gonna match this one??? Huh? Huh??.. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
And I thought I was the only sane one here. Very good. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Never heard of this form but I loved reading your verse. Especially the closing.LOL! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Would you wedge me in, please? I've learned a lot in my old age, but when reading little tidbits like this, I realize that... I still have a lot to learn! Well done Vicki! |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
I did enjoy reading this.What a uniquely different format. Need to study this one. Have had difficulty finding more information on it.Can you help? *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL @ the 'versy-go-round'!ROFL! You're too much, my friend! Believe it or not, this was kind of fun to write...kind of...LOL And the headache didn't last too long.LOL Thanks for the A+! Coming from you, that'a even better than extra credit! Love ya, sweet friend. Cindi- Nope...no cheating in MizNanners' class! LOL You're on your own...and you did just fine! Love and hugs MizNanners- I'm sure you'll do just fine, teach! Glad this one earned an A+. Thanks much! mirror man- LOL...nope...you're not alone! Glad you like! VAS- Thanks much...glad you enjoyed! Lady In White- Always room to 'wedge you in', my friend. I'm learning too..and having fun doing it! Glad you liked this one. Rindercella- I haven't found much info about this style either. The only rule I know is that each word in a line should have one more syllable than the previous word. You'll find info about it in the poetry workshop as well... /pip/Forum22/HTML/000339.html#6 Hope that helps. Thanks so much for the kind reply. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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