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A Dream
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A Dream |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sun kissed wing, shimming white against azure skies, riding salt taste winds with haunting cries. Little crabs scurrying in sideways dance, to the rhythmic music of nature’s chants. Muffled boom of swelling waves, dripping softly with rainbow haze. Mermaid treasures roll and tumble, under breakers, with their rumble. Shells and sand dollars without number await the gathering from silent slumber. Rushing foam licks sun warmed sand, retreating reluctantly like a spreading fan. Gray backed dolphins rolling beyond tidal rise in majestic beauty for anyone’s eyes. This is where I could spend my last days, soaking in nature with her watery ways. What can be better then this in my reach? your hand in mine, as we walk that beach. [This message has been edited by Logan (edited 08-06-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
There is NOTHING better. Sigh... Sandra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Logan There was such exquisite imagery in this piece and I loved it. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sounds and pleasures of walking a shore are brought alive in this lovely poem...thank you so very much for taking a moment, and allowing your imagery to shine through... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--it's a lovely dream place..and so real as well. |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
I myself born and raised by the ocean have a tremendous love for those waters, reaching out for the waves, your work is extremely beautiful, maybe upon your next long walk you'll see me there standing looking off into the distance admiring the beauty of her freedom. Wonderful work! -XERXES |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you knew Id love this one... and you knew Id have pics...right?  very lovely images and intend poet Logan.   wont you sing me your poetry |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Wow! Beautifully done! This appeals to both the romantic in me and the beach freak (I live in Myrtle Beach! lol) Wonderful "visual" you've painted here! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Gentle keeper ... this is so full of beautiful imagery~ Sighhhhhhh ~ Lovely piece of writing~ Peace~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Well Logan, what could possibly be better than that~and you said it so well! I absolutely loved this one.~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I've spent a lot of time recently, drooling over Wyland prints I can't afford.  Your poem is just as enchanting - a dream I'm going to print out and save. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* I miss you, my friend. It always uplifts the corners of my mouth to find one of your treasures here. I love this, Sweet One. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
No, very gentle smile, I don't think so either..glad you agree and were here, Sandra Ahh, Sue, and you have some of the best beaches in the world..very gentle smile..someday, I want to dive that Barrier Reef Ahh, Sis, it is so wonderful, glad you felt it there too..very gentle smile Martie,,very gentle smile..to be there is bliss itself..and thank you for being here xerxes, thank you for being here, and if I see you there, why we will laugh at the antics of the dolphins..gentle smile Janet Marie, sigh, your pics, and you KNOW how I feel about dolphins and your verse at the end..ahh, your muse does love you...very gentle smile. Thank you so much rascalx, gentle smile, thank you for being here, and I appreciate your kind words..Glad you enjoyed Ahhh, Marge, but you know I love the swamps and bayous also..but thank you for words that are over and above the reality..very gentle smile Ahh, Mysteria, you just HAD to put a pic like that on there to bring back memories..very gentle smile..Thank you for bringing them back Illusion..you are so kind, thank you so much for the read and the very nice words..gentle smile Vandana, very gentle smile, you know I always appreciate you being here Ahh, gentle maid, you should, for you know the sounds. miss seeing you also, take good care, and keep those corners turned up..they look real good when you do..very gentle smile |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This one is definitely one for the books and shows not only of your talent but your understanding of a major influence on life. Beautifully written and the flow and feel of this piece is a treasure to cherish. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Absolutely lovely write, my friend. All writing comes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Makes me miss the beaches of home... Your last line resonated with wishful, nostalgic, and perhaps even a touch melancholy impression... A picturesque poem, to be sure. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for bringing this back up, Mark...it added a smile to the end of my day.... |
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