Open Poetry #15 |
Tonight’s Lies |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Tonight’s Lies tonight tell me lies tomorrow the truth I will know so tonight tell me lies and tell them to me slow say all the words I long to hear whisper them softly as you hold me near for in this darkness I can’t see your eyes and in the light lies are but a thin disguise so tonight tell me lies "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Applause, my friend...a "wish I had said that" bow to you. jwesley |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love this one and I have to agree at night lies are sometimes accepted. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, Helen, Helen, you know if I've been lied to I open the door and tell them not to let it hit them in the .....on the way out! Enjoyed this one dear. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well this is not a lie, sometimes we need what we need...that's what this is about...and very nicely done |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
The lies I long to hear at night make me no diference come morning. A very good write you have here Helen. [This message has been edited by g-hm (edited 08-06-2001).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Very Good! |
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