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Rooms Within............. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I keep within me Many rooms Places to keep my treasures Memories of people That matter to my heart Rooms that echo laughter ~ radiate joy Rain resounding in tinkling tempo To the roar of the sea I walk these halls….. I visit these rooms….. And I am given to smile Yet within me Are rooms of darkness Emotions I fear This burgundy rage I am unable To control So that remains A door I have yet to open. ………..don’t test the lock……….. ~SEA~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful! Leave that lock alone! Well done, gal! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
O very very good SEA....but someone is jiggling the handle....I hear it moving.... Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Emotions I fear This burgundy rage I am unable To control So that remains A door I have yet to open. ============================ "burgundy rage" ... very very cool image... but I hate to tell ya girlie...sooner or later those rooms gotta be swept out... otherwise the cobwebs will smother us... the dust will choke us... I gotta a whole Hotel of these rooms... the elevator quit..gotta take the steps... one at a time  cool poem Sea....write it out...think of your pen as the cleaning crew. wont you sing me your poetry |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
It's good to know oneself...and to warn others! LOL Good one, SEA. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Don't Test The Lock!" Whoa now, shut my mouth and throw away the keep...steppin' easy here ...(hee, hee). Really liked this Sea, but couldn't resist a little fun...and I do mean it that way. Insightful (and sometimes oneself is the hardest of all people to read)and well said. jwesley |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like this one, self exploration. Keep that key to yourself  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes fortunately we can put away some of the pain for another day when we are better equiped to handle it...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
SEA, sweetheart, I so enjoyed this one. I mean, you really showed your stuff with these lines. I felt that lock turning and man, I just loved this. "This burgundy rage" Gosh, I love this line!!! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" Kay [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 08-06-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
don't test the lock indeed. . . and possibly place another one there. . . well done SEA, I really liked the ideas of this one, as well as "burgundy rage". . . that's a great phrase. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have rooms and I have holes in the dirt.........well now......how do you suppose that looks from the inside of my head? Seriously, this was a cool write and as much as I hate to say it.......JM is right, you will oneday have to open them doors and sweep up the clutter. Nicely penned and expressed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks for the warning. Excellent! Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ This is a fine penning~ The corridors of the heart and mind are explored as time and circumstance allow~ Nice done, sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done Sea, and I too have a room like that! It is not a pretty sight either, lol. I loved this one. ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very clever write SEA. Put another lock on that door! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- This is awesome! Very cool write, indeed! There is much to learn and gain by exploring those rooms over time. Wonderfully penned, my friend. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, Ohh I like I like  Very well written and soo easy to relate to. I have quite a few doors that I am afraid to approach let alone open... but they will open.. in time. TaraB |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much.... there are just some areas within me I simply don't trust.... so I keep those doors locked I suppose, eventually I will have to sweep them out, but I don't think they will ever be empty..... |
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