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Tomorrow Suzanne
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Tomorrow Suzanne |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
All along our narrow road My desperate load Truths untold Love on hold. Where we stayed Nights we laid A memory never let’s go Second chances I’d blow Hateful words I’d throw Are we still so unknown? I lost us back then Missed your grin You comforted my sin. So, this is to you And all we went through If I’d only knew I’d take back all time And every tear When you loved to be mine Wish you were here. Broken promises mended All plans I intended. Then, it was us Our broken trust. Now, it’s just me Wandering Still remembering With relationships I’m found pretending Regretting. Days of change No more pain. Where I am Lying face down in the sand Holding a ring in my hand Trapped in a Yesterday with all we had Today, it’s our demons that haunt my mental land Asleep, in a cold sweat I ask……. “ Is it Tomorrow, yet, Suzanne?” |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was such a beautiful portrayal of a cherished love. May love come your way again soon. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
Touching and poignant. Sand does not taste good. Wish you very much luck. ShannonM |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So, this is to you And all we went through If I’d only knew I’d take back all time And every tear When you loved to be mine Wish you were here. The self honesty of this is impressive...welcome! |
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