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xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

0 posted 2001-08-05 10:17 PM

Prepare for all time in these twisted fantasies I wish were mine
Untrue to my goals, my regret bleeds
Disguised in a fake reality
I saw so many hearts broken along my troubled growth
Felt the brush of suicide, escaping to a fake paradise
Tumbling away into another year
Mounting a paranoid fear
I held on tighter. But still losing a ground to stand on
No more searching for the vision, where nothing has to be “gone”
Disappear with my hollow pain
Refrain from all distain that torments my mind frame
Tortured deep inside a void called “worry”
Buried deep in the ground, souls of my blood, but uncovered was more fury
Speedometer dials raise higher, the engine gives more, roaming faster to that “unknown”
Dismiss the sorrow of never catching up to me on this long road
I follow my dream…All the way, wherever the crash may explode.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-08-05 10:27 PM

What a great first post.....I enjoyed it very much. I hope you choose the road and find the dream you are searching for.
Welcome to Passions. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-08-05 11:02 PM

this is intense and very expressive...
superb use of imagery.
Well done...Welcome to Poetry Land...
so nice to meet you.

jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

3 posted 2001-08-05 11:57 PM

Great expression of facing life head on. And kudos to you for following your dream and taking the chance. Nice poem.

Shannon

Cheryl Flemming
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 102

4 posted 2001-08-05 11:59 PM

Great poem.I really enjoyed it.Always follow your dreams.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-08-06 12:22 PM

Life in the fast lane! Don't forget to stop and smell the roses and spend some time with us here at Passions

Welcome!!! Great first post.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-08-06 12:39 PM

Welcome to Passions ~ you will love it here~

Wow - what a powerful first post!! I look forward to more of your poetry

By the way, I really like your username too~

Take care,
Melissa~

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

7 posted 2001-08-06 12:45 PM

Welcome to passions! This was a very neat first poem!!! You will enjoy it here as Melissa said!!
Cindi

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