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The Beauty You Possess
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The Beauty You Possess |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Beauty You Possess You know I think you are beautiful but then probably so do lots of guys. I find you alluring in this world of my admiring eyes. What's that you say? Why has not a husband come your way? Because his eyes have not been opened to the beauty that you possess so they can not clearly see how richly you have been blessed. But thats perfectly all right with me. I go to heaven when your beauty visits me. Jameslee@August04,2001 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~  always the sweet one.....this is wonderful |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
James This was truly a beautiful piece of writing. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you write and speak with your heart SBJ... and they always see the world thru shades of love. sincere, sweet write...a beauty of a poem  jm |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I would think that the one for whom this was intended would take this to heart... this is very well done and honestly flattering... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Suetang, Janet and Mark... I haven't shown her the poem Mark. A was having a conversation with a woman I recently met and when I told her she was beautiful she challenged me and said "Well if I'm so beautiful why am I having such a hard time finding a husband...and I told her I didn't think they were able to see her beauty...of course I was seeing it... she was fun...when she offered me her hand I could feel my heart racing and I told her and she said why is my heart racing and I said "because I like you." Anyway don't know when I'll see her again...she took my number but didn't give me hers...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, How sweet you are. Sheesh if anyone would actually say something like to me he would definately have my number ... lol. I hope she calls... if she doesn't she's insane  TaraB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Stunning work, James. She must be some lady to inspire such beautiful poetry! All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I agree it takes someone very inspiring to bring out this kind of magic, this was excellent. ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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