Open Poetry #15 |
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A Walk |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A W a l k Virginia Salter I feel like taking a walk not the kind that the doc says, no, more leisurely with someone special on my hand whose elbows gently rub mine whose ears hear my inner thoughts someone who rejoices with me in my dreams whose eyes twinkle now and then when we catch the other grabbing a look almost on the sly someone whose footsteps keep rhythm with my heart and mine with his as we stroll allowing the dust from our strides to mingle and the air to carry aromas of flora to surround and place their scents into our lives giving perfume to sweeten our memories the kind of walk that heals inner struggles deep crevices of pain one in which the goal of the steps can be found anywhere along the way and the remainder of the journey is dressing, topping, whipped cream and chopped nuts that adorn and make more savory even the wondrous beauty of the adventure itself and you know, I’d like that walk for you, too, friend © August 20. 2000 |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
The Connection : ) Thank You |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok Virginia...getting tennies, after all, DQ is only a couple of blocks away...I'll meet you there! Very sweet! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now that would be an interesting walk...James |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Great description here. Nice write. ![]() Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all, wrote this one last year but would still love a walk like this for each of you and for me, too. the D.Q., Sunshine, is about 1 1/2 miles from my place, got my shoes on, however, I just got back from a 2 mile walk so let me catch my breath btw, the Starlight Parade to kick off fair week begins at 7:00 p.m. PDT, come on down!!! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
loved this especially allowing the dust from our strides to mingle thought that was rather romantic ![]() |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My kind of walk, my friend...I'll meet you were my path meets yours... jwesley |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Someone to walk with, that's something we all long for. Nice poem Throw your heart out in front of you |
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