Open Poetry #15 |
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Fields of Green.....inspired by Martie |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Soft sparkles of light, take my hand and hold it tight. Into fields of green be led, for my span has surely sped. I asked not why the decide, with the wishes, I do abide. Only a blink of darkness there, then the bliss of peace and care. No worries left, not feel of pain, only my pathway to start again. Comfort drifts around my soul, lifting me up, making me whole. To each it be for how it may, but it was green fields for me to lay. The feeling was there I wouldn’t be long, before being surrounded with nature’s song. For now I will rest in loving hands then begin a new trip to other lands. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Beautifully done Logan... |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is so softly, quietly spiritual...and shall touch many.... |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very peaceful, but I hope you're not going anywhere.. ![]() Beautiful write. Sandra |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I would think that since I've known you, Sweet One that you have crossed over into many different lands. I'm sure those lands are all the more enriched for it! This is tender and sweet of course, and you know I live for tenderness and sweetness. ![]() |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This likes me, Logan. ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautifully written so tender and caring Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Awww Logan! Yes, I think that's just how it is...with maybe a library and an ocean mixed in...one to learn from and the other to cross before you can move on. Thank you for showing me this place of peace. Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Such a lovely, lovely inspired piece~ She has that effect on lots of us~ Wonderfully done, poet~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I like the different possible interpretations of this one, Logan... for now, I'll settle on it being a blissful nap in nature. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully spoken my friend. . . ![]() well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a vibrant poem of inspire ![]() Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Only a blink of darkness there, then the bliss of peace and care. No worries left, not feel of pain, only my pathway to start again. Comfort drifts around my soul, lifting me up, making me whole. =============================== your poetic mind is verdant with possibilities and peace ![]() lovely thought Logan...a serene dream. a sweet gift of inspiration made even sweeter when found in a fellow poets words. well done poet of the gentle winds ![]() slow burn ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This was like a little vacation beside a cool pool in a green meadow...very well done, and I know I, for one, am deeply grateful that you read some inspiration from Martie, in order that we could all share from this... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
brought out the nature lover in me..thank you " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely beautifully written, and my kind of place Logan., Martie wanted a library and a bridge, so if I may: As I cross the bridge to library fair, I take the knowledge from this side there. Soon serenity is lighting up by soul, Another bridge crossed, to get to my goal. ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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