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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-03 10:20 PM


the break

1961
one-pieced, strap
to shoulder, no
cut outs, streamed
to the line
hip bones barely
hidden under
dark of suit,
slight bulge of
buttocks on thin
frame

step one, step up
grasp handles
sun bearing down on
determination
step two, no weight
to carry up but
resolve

steps three, four
straightening of
young spine, a
lift of chin, a breast
of wind whips golden
wisps of hair
trepidation in grasp
of handle
stepping five, six, seven
then on, till sanded
board meets
flat of arched feet

deep breath
resolving to solve
jittering thoughts
that won’t listen to
a moment’s notice
of stop, stop
listen

cheers and voices
no jeers now choices
made, this is the
time to set
pace to step and
step raise arms then
fly, curve, bend,
to blue

breaking water with
fingertips, up palm
to wrist, forearm
to upper and head
breaks larger hole
clean and mean in
design of dream this
the dive of a
life’s time, cold
hitting hard
once immersed,
then reborn into
sun’s light

gasping from chill’s
thrill of beating one’s
own odds of fear…

and yet

not showing off

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-08-03 10:39 PM


That moment pause in the air, of arching over, and then KNOWING it was right, the fall perfect, water rushing...very gentle smile..you done good
helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

2 posted 2001-08-03 10:39 PM


Champion!
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