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Open Poetry #15

Hearts

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-08-01 05:35 PM

Hearts

Should...
         your lips
Share......
           my kiss.
Would.....
our hearts know
the joy of
bliss
???

Jameslee@August01,2001

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-01 06:05 PM

Very tender and heartfelt plea, James. I hope she says yes.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-01 06:09 PM

love this one... nicely done!!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-08-01 06:52 PM

Thank you Lone Wolf and Cpat Hair for the nice responses....James

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-08-03 03:53 PM

As a heart knows the pain of absence, so it knows the joy of bliss... the catch is to know when the other is being honest...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-03 08:52 PM

Well...a kiss can tell all! I hope you get to find out!
Sincerely,
Regina

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-08-03 10:07 PM

A world of though simply stated. Well done James....

jwesley

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