Open Poetry #15 |
moonglowing |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
~*~ silver plating light surrounding takes up all night moonglowing delight ~*~ soft, moon's insistence open eyes and pan silver striking golden fire ~*~ desire is breezing moonglowing is now easing sunbeams twinkle in ~*~ |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Your pen has painted delightful images. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
moonglowing is now easing sunbeams twinkle in -------------------- A lovely write....... I quite enjoyed it...... Thank you ************************** |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
breezing desire warmed sun's rays exciting this pair enraptured morning http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 08-05-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Luminescent words shining forth from heart to pen with dazzle of moon I love these 'moon' senryus Well expressed, lady!~ Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ And, of course, you had no idea that I would find the glow so charming ! Lovely, lovely, lovely ... all three~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love the reference to silver and gold....hmmm, off I go! That was lovely. ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
beautiful...wish i could write this style this well |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Moonglow was never so beautiful dear Lady In White...I too wish I could write like so. jwesley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- Lovely as always.. You write these so beautifully. Much enjoyed. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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