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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The flats of Mozart moan for me contrasting sweet tranquility an island in a land of sea-- Mozart moans for me. Let the heavens open gate with strings on wing the angel spake-- and every syllable sang true... the name of God I sing to you. Oasis in a sea of sand complacency-- the phantom hand with nothing left of understand but the need to be with you. Everything, I am, is just a multitude of barrelled lust... Everything I am, became... mocks the silence of the sane. Who am I to even judge? Why my eyes be chosen-healed? Why must I take a step and budge in war of natural congeal? What is there to do in life? But sit and scrape and sharpen knife? Now I am steel. In temperament... molt of feathers-- angel sent. Each gift came--then each gift went... gladly paid in pennies spent. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mzzz Serenity~ This is one powerfully awesome piece of writing ! It's a keeper for me ! You've woven something that writhes with magic, as though it's alive~ Poetry speaks you well~ Thank you for being a poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Everything, I am, is just a multitude of barrelled lust... Everything I am, became... mocks the silence of the sane. excellent passage... as usual.. I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Now I am steel. In temperament... ================= Really interesting write and I particularly enjoyed the above  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
there is so very much in this piece, so very much. IT's more than deep, it's moving. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is awesome, just wow! Melissa~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I can't pick a favourite part in this...I love it all. You are such a talented woman. Another beautiful write Karen Hugs, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very strong write, expressing the sadness within. Take care. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
words well spent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write my home-town friend... jwesley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm sure Mozart is not the only one....this is awesome  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought for sure everyone would hate this one...but what do I know? Popping in to say thank you, between MORE funerals. I love you all, and thank you much. I miss the sanctuary of being here. Write the beauty of life for me, good poet people. Hugs to forum. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- Hate it? Absolutely not!! This is awesome! You are an incredible poet, my friend. Love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A truely lovely write with many different meanings to be considered, I liked. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Well written and with depth. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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