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The Day I Met You
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The Day I Met You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Am I worthy of this love That you've bestowed upon me You have opened up my eyes And set my spirit free Such love I'd never felt Before you came along You made me feel so special You made my heart be strong Is it wrong for me to have All this love I feel for you Would it make your life much easier If I just faded out of view The hours in your company I'll treasure 'til the end How you brightened up my being And caused my heart to mend How very blessed was I The day that I met you The times with you I'll cherish There's no one else - just me and you Suetang |
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SILLY WAWCHEO Junior Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 13Mighigan |
lovely, I felt this one........Sue Susan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i congratulate you for finding such a person and relate to you feeling not good enough for him...i think i understand...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely said..... I enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are more than worthy Sue! It's hard to accept such bliss sometimes. Wonderful verse.Sincerely, Regina What lies behind us and what lies before us |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Simply Beautiful : ) Thank You |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, this is beautiful and you are worth having all good things in life. You are a special person. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your lovely words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - it is nice to read the feelings of one that is there, as I. What a great feeling it is... BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Let's turn this around he's lucky to have you!!! This verse is lovely but it sure gives this guy a lot of power! I enjoyed." I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Somewhere in the definition of Love, your poetry has a distinct place, Sue. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Bill Thank you for reading this. Irish Rose Thank you for your comments. Mark I'm very humbled by what you write, thank you so much. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Suetang, Ohhh this is wonderful I know exactly where you are coming from. I feel way to lucky to have my love as well. And I understand how you feel... I keep waiting for mine to realize he can do better ~chuckles~ Beautiful  TaraB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May your love last forever. Wonderful write. All writing comes |
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