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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Through doors of time and destiny I swear one day his face I'll see and when he finally reaches me I'll know the feel of truly free. Neither star nor clouds shall hide him nor the shadows of moon-less dim not even harshness of fates' whim shall keep me back from where I've been. Doors harshly closed, slammed in my face I peek through slats to find my place surely I'll find at least a trace of he who loves me, though displaced. Another place in time he lives waits to remove the blocks within If only we could push through sieves true life and love we have to give.. (just another little fantasy..) [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-02-2001).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Yes, if only we could open the doors to time. If you find that key, let me know... Love, Elise |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
it may be just another fantasy, but it captured me, and I find myself peeking through slats to find my place!! Another great one, lil sis, and it's so good to read your wonderful work!!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, my friend. . . the key is right in front of you. . .  wonderfully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sven, WHERE is the key??? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
So cool! I enjoyed this.  Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for this one, I needed it. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice write..and the key to those doors is often i our hearts... open it..and the other doors open themselves.. I enjoyed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sandra, this is definitely one of your best. I sense that Inspiration is leading you to such doors... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Doors closed would open someday as your words guide you to your way A very well done piece Sandra.......quite lovely......and you'd find the keys hopefully soon... Thank you ***************************** |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
This touched me. |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
I never found the door to be locked! when I first opened it, I pushed when I should have pulled. ah ha it opens inwards! Seriously the door of the heart is not locked where you need a key, just dream. wonderful writing...wpwpoet |
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