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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-08-02 05:56 AM

Please Release Me

Michelle...
was it all in vain?
Am I the only one to blame?
Tell me what I did wrong.
Did I come on too strong?
Does my desperate desire scare you?
Will you tell me what you want to do?
Is your silence telling me we are through?
Come and kiss me the way you used to do
or tell me we are through
and help me to get over you.
Release me from your silky spell.
Some day I'll release you as well.
Please.......Michelle.

Jameslee@August02,2001

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

1 posted 2001-08-02 07:19 AM

James
You put your heart on the table with this one. I hope you find your answers and she comes back to you. Huggggggs to you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-08-02 02:36 PM

Yes Ariana this poem truly reveal the feelings from deep within my heart...thanks for your nice response...James

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-08-03 01:02 AM

James,

I hope Michelle answers all those questions for you. Nicely, honestly written. Well done!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-08-04 08:22 AM

Me too Auguste...me too...she is a fabulous lady...James

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-08-04 06:49 PM

Sometimes, they know exactly what they want, and yet, when they get it... they don't have any idea what to do with it... I hope you two work it out to a positive resolution...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-08-04 07:17 PM

sometimes my friend. . . the slience speaks. . .

from the heart James. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-08-04 07:53 PM

Words of love,sad but make a this a beautiful poem.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-08-05 10:14 AM

James - you write your feelings well, I also see your heart on the table, open, caring, wanting...

BC

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-08-05 10:18 AM

take action! Go get her!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

10 posted 2001-08-06 01:03 AM

James
I hope she listens to you and hears you! I think this is a wonderful write...make sure she sees it!!! good luck
Cindi

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

11 posted 2001-08-06 01:35 AM

This is beautifully sad, I hope she hears and you get all that you need.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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