Open Poetry #15 |
Our Romantic Night In Paris |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
My heart takes on a warm glow as I fondly remember some of the times we've spent together consumed by our love and passion I remember the night we walked hand in hand at dusk and kissed on the brige overlooking the Seine and how you put your arm lovingly around me as we walked towards our favourite restaurant enticed by the exquisite aromas coming from the gourmet kitchen We drank champagne, you laughed at my silly jokes and we gazed at one another over the seductive glow of the candlelight as our love was heralded by a serenade You told me how much you loved me as you took my hand in yours Your ensuing kiss brought my senses alive and my skin tingled as your lips encased mine How brightly the stars shone that night as we walked the cobbled streets towards our hotel nearby the Eiffel Tower This city of lovers had enveloped us as we became swept up in the romance of this beautiful city So much beautiful love we made that night and many nights after that I love you as much now as I did then Our love is so timeless and precious A love I could only once dream about but now it is mine to preserve I see our love as being like a fine gem The more you polish it, the more it shines You are the light of my life my lover, my friend my precious jewel Suetang |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
To have a love like this would be wonderful, Suetang. You express it so well. Maeve |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Simply lovey~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Suetang...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The stuff good films and books are made of. Savouring it, vicariously... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
It has always been one of my dreams to share love in Paris...your write reaffirms this dream. Thank you! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, what a wonderful write! Beautiful as can be! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue this is so beautiful. Sounds like it was a wonderful time. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . oh how I want to go. . . this was wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kindness. I am very fortunate to have been to Paris twice now and it is truly one of the most romantic cities in the world. I'm glad you all enjoyed the journey with me. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue you did an absolutely wonderful job of this one, I enjoyed it so much! ~To see real beauty you must first look with your heart~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Mysteria I'm so glad you liked this one, thank you so much. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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