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Just a little Credit ...
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Just a little Credit ... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
...for letting go Applied for credit but didn't get it it seems the past tends to last tried to erase it but still I taste it like bitter bile lingering a while was told it's cool but I'm no fool It's plain to see you can't believe I'm not the same~ I've quit the game for only a jerk enjoys getting hurt heart to heart here's to a new start let egos begone as we both move on innuendos aside along with the pride I just want us to be the you & the me separately... ~Tier 8/01 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How about credit for the poetic honesty of this? I think it's more than due. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Thank you, Duncan... ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
here's your card my friend. . . with a unlimited line. . .  great job on this one. . .nice flow and wonderful thoughts. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I love the straightforwardness of this, Tier...nicely written! sp  can I see my world without you in it? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
With a credit line like this, both sides end up winning... well done, I can see this won't bankrupt anyone for its honesty... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
No one would ever call you a fool... and as for credit..you deserve a great deal for writing like this..and for the honesty it shows... very nice piece my friend... very nice indeed |
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