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Glow on the Interstate
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Glow on the Interstate |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I’ve been warmed by a misplaced sun-- train me until I beam with expertise... I’ve been misguided by a wayward moon-- stop me from driving through the rain... migrant thoughts have intruded on my solitude-- lure them out with the scent of freedom... the potential validity of these dreams, in addition to symmetry coming into play, incorporates the unimaginable concept of reality... walking with the cadence of your eyes’ breeze stops me from spending my light on futile pursuits... I’m wrapped in peace and flow in a tempo stream... somebody please drop me off at my baby’s door... you did say that the next stop is heaven, didn’t you? pretending we’re together is as sensible as planting wildflowers... I missed you long before our fingers untied... there’s a break in the clouds as I head further north on this highway... but, such scattered thoughts as these are brought into conjunction with remembering the spreading of that smile across your face... -kh  it was love that first drew me, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ok sweetie ... I have to admit while I was driving south and you were driving north once again I was tempted to turn around and change this pattern that we seem caught in. So next time dont be surprised if I refuse to untie my fingers from yours. This is a very lovely poem and you know it means the world to me, and of course your gift of vision and imagery mix perfectly with the emotions. I love you. I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Nicely done...you use such abstract thoughts that come together. (in my view anyways) And the words you use...I don't even know what they mean, but they're great! And your imagery is wonderful. I like your s/n...  -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the potential validity of these dreams, in addition to symmetry coming into play, incorporates the unimaginable concept of reality... walking with the cadence of your eyes’ breeze stops me from spending my light on futile pursuits... ==================================== pretending we’re together is as sensible as planting wildflowers... I missed you long before our fingers untied ================================ Well girlie...when youre inspired... whew!! this is a very very cool write SP... in vocabulary...imagery...and emote... this is one of my faves of yours... write on..ride on excellent poetry poetess Kooler-Knickers  me slow burn ... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I missed you long before our fingers untied... I know this stretch of highway well! Appreciated this much! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris, beautiful poem hon. the imagery in this is excellent..i really "felt" this one. congrats sweetie im very happy for you!! loves ya aims ~~~~~ aka koolaid kid lol p.s i'll e-ya soon "but i see your true colors, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowpants, Well you blew up a snow storm with this one. Enjoyed the read nicely done. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Snowpants--The love in this is so wonderful to read, because you have written with your heart and some talent too. Much enjoyed! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
(sorry for taking so LONG to thank you all...  )M: yes, and an ugly pattern it is...same temptation here, too, baby...I also won't put up much of a fight either...  ...thanks, sweets, for the compliments...your opinion of my work means so much to me...  Leah: thank you...I am glad it made sense to you! J: oh yeah...inspired, indeed...oh, what a muse can do! thanks, girlie...I'm happy you liked this...a little more on a personal level, but, I just couldn't help it... JLR: then I'm sure you know how not fun it is, huh? thank you...glad you appreciated it! Aims: hey...thanks so much, girlie...nice to see ya! ttys! -e ~~~~~~ Sy: a snow storm is cool...  ...but thank you so much for your compliment! glad you enjoyed! Martie: thanks so much for your reply...this one was definitely from the heart...glad you could stop by! sp  it was love that first drew me, it is love that will keep me here... now I see love burning brightly when everything else is unclear... [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 08-05-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
snowpants- The love you've penned here makes my heart smile for you. Very beautiful heartfelt write. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
As always, your work inspires me! *hugs & smiles* ~Tier |
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