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Deep in my soul
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Deep in my soul |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Last night I saw this orange moon big round ball like a sunflower bloom some veils of dark clouds passing by tiny lights of a plane I saw flying high A sky full of stars lightened by the sun whom I could not see but it was fun I saw the big bear the 'saucepan' we say same spot through summer he will stay The horizons were lit by an orange light probably reflections of citylights bright each nightwalk gives a different view and every time this sky seems to renew I dimmed my flashlight stood in the dark saw in the distance the lighthousemark flashing tree times and then waits a bit there's lots going on in the dark I admit An owl flying over no sound of wings but no nasty wasps or a bee that stings you can hear the silence if you listen well I feel it deep in my soul is all I can tell A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, No wasps or bees, this forum needs an exterminator as it is!!! I love this! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
The horizons were lit by an orange light probably reflections of citylights bright each night walk gives a different view and every time this sky seems to renew' 'you can hear the silence if you listen well I feel it deep in my soul is all I can tell' Fantastic write, Titia...you've penned a beauty here with these descriptions! Love this! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Titia~ A well expressed poem, you have some great images here And I love... "Last night I saw this orange moon big round ball like a sunflower bloom" Melissa~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Listen to 'the sounds of silence'... Nice Titia...  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Titia....what a lovely sharing of the night's skies, and all that they hold.... thank you for this... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Beautiful imagery in a rhyme that flows smoothly.  I feel as though I sat beside you - thank you. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well interwoven with the peacefulness of just...being, alone, content, at peace; if only for a moment or two. jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful expression of the pleasures of the evening...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful write Titia, and very enjoyed. You captured the moment well. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Passion friends, I don't have the time to answer you personally, so I will do that hereby for all of you. Thank you very much for your lovely replies. Yes, I enjoy the nights in this open countryside. Not just the nights, but every moment of the day too. It's a beautiful countryside if you'll open your eyes to see. It's hard to explain how deep this hits my soul. Sweet  to all of you.Titia |
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