Open Poetry #15 |
Nature's Fine Display |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
In my usual haste to go about my daily routine I almost missed witnessing displays of nature as they happened in my garden before my eyes So I stopped in my tracks and put aside my chores as I sat and enjoyed part of nature's daily show as it unfolded I sat quietly as I watched the wattle birds draining every drop of nectar out of the flowers in my pink flowering gum tree I watched the blackbirds as they joyously splashed in the birdbath underneath the arching leaves of the tree fern All too soon alarmed by a sudden noise they took to the skies in a flutter of wings that sent droplets of water through the air on their departure Suddenly all was quiet again until I heard the noisy chatter of the rainbow lorikeets as they gorged themselves amongst my apple tree I closed my eyes and inhaled the clean crisp air as my senses became heightened by the sweet intoxicating smell of my jasmine creeper on the back fence How deeply I inhaled to absorb this sweetly seductive scent Eyes now wide open I gazed across the garden beds and witnessed all the colors of the rainbow amongst various shades of green This garden of mine is like a masterpiece on nature's canvas No picture could do justice as such beauty should only be viewed through the naked eye My chores will always be there tomorrow but I may not see such an awesome display of nature again So I will choose to live for the moment In this place of peace and serenity Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ 'I heard the noisy chatter of the rainbow lorikeets as they gorged themselves amongst my apple tree' What beauty greeted you ~ Awesomely lovely write~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Displayed finely here! I love nature Sue. Thanks for taking me into the garden with your words. If only I could stay out there all day! Sincerely, Regina |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
My chores will always be there tomorrow but I may not see such an awesome display of nature again So I will choose to live for the moment In this place of peace and serenity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Suetang, A beautiful display of nature you present in this lovely poem. I dearly love poems about nature, and you wrote this with such beautiful imagery. Well done! Deb |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
thank you for a stop and feel of nature as I needed it today! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Suetang, "All too soon alarmed by a sudden noise they took to the skies in a flutter of wings that sent droplets of water through the air on their departure" this is wonderful. loved it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your lovely words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful images, Sue...I truly enjoyed this...great write! sp it was love that first drew me, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sue, to stop and smell the roses, or your garden as such...that is what makes life..very gentle smile |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
snowpants Thank you for your kindness. logan As always I thank you so very much for reading my work. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A brief moment in Eden, but a lasting impression maintained... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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