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Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-08-01 12:36 PM

Looking for the See,
I stumble and fall on the road
through which I try to swim.
I have seen
the ocean in my memory,
roaring, and grey and white
passionate and Angry!
Driven by the pulse
of what to me is unseen,
I stumble forward,
Towards faith.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2001-08-01 01:32 AM

To have faith is to
believe blindly..
Good job.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2001-08-01 02:28 AM

Samia
This was very well written. Welcome to Passions. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-01 02:42 AM

Indeed a great write. Welcome, you will really like it here.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-08-01 09:59 AM

A well-done piece......
I enjoyed it......

Welcome to Passions .....I hope you would enjoy it here......

Thank you
***********************

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-08-01 11:08 AM

sounds like the same stretch of beach I stumbled on...watch your footing!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

6 posted 2001-08-01 11:17 AM

Samia, I enjoyed this one. I can tell you have a lot to say. Keep it up!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-08-01 11:22 AM

I like this, but have a question:

Looking for the See,
I stumble and fall on the road
through which I try to swim.

are you trying to swim through the road?

Nice word play on See...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-08-01 07:24 PM

faith to see the sea. . .

well done. . . we all should strive for this. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

9 posted 2001-08-01 10:01 PM

Hey ya'll! Thank you for the kind words and welcomes. I'm already enjoying this place. There's alot of wisdom, truth, and funniness in here.

Cpat Hair, about me swimming through the road, I'm not sure what I was trying to say, but I think I have an idea. It's like being in a river and trying to walk through it because you dream of land.

Samia

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

10 posted 2001-08-01 10:07 PM

PS - Irish Rose I'll do my best to "watch my footing" - but it'll probably end me up walking smack into a wall. Thanks,

Samia

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