Open Poetry #15 |
Stumble towards the see |
Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Looking for the See, I stumble and fall on the road through which I try to swim. I have seen the ocean in my memory, roaring, and grey and white passionate and Angry! Driven by the pulse of what to me is unseen, I stumble forward, Towards faith. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
To have faith is to believe blindly.. Good job. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Samia This was very well written. Welcome to Passions. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Indeed a great write. Welcome, you will really like it here. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A well-done piece...... I enjoyed it...... Welcome to Passions .....I hope you would enjoy it here...... Thank you *********************** |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sounds like the same stretch of beach I stumbled on...watch your footing! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Samia, I enjoyed this one. I can tell you have a lot to say. Keep it up! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I like this, but have a question: Looking for the See, I stumble and fall on the road through which I try to swim. are you trying to swim through the road? Nice word play on See... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
faith to see the sea. . . well done. . . we all should strive for this. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Hey ya'll! Thank you for the kind words and welcomes. I'm already enjoying this place. There's alot of wisdom, truth, and funniness in here. Cpat Hair, about me swimming through the road, I'm not sure what I was trying to say, but I think I have an idea. It's like being in a river and trying to walk through it because you dream of land. Samia |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
PS - Irish Rose I'll do my best to "watch my footing" - but it'll probably end me up walking smack into a wall. Thanks, Samia |
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