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Open Poetry #15

Tea

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-07-31 03:29 PM

Missouri,
at dusk
in the evening,
in the summer

far from here,
farther than before
it seems

cold grass
cool air
iced tea
against our little
feet and
legs and arms,
and down our throats,
We ran and played
at dusk.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-31 04:26 PM

nice images... I enjoyed!

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

2 posted 2001-07-31 05:56 PM

    your sketch about the sketch of human is really near to reality. Attractive poem but there is some thing lake which is your rathum. Please improve it.
              See you next time with new poem.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-31 06:52 PM

a wonderful perspective. . . kind of like one of those little globes that you shake. . .

well done. . .

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