Open Poetry #15 |
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Mon Dieu! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533![]() |
My flower, on you I am a dew, united too, a deux, in southern drawl, I'd hoped would ensue, melodious consent 'ah do' concupiscent stew, I'd brew for you, and now, can this be true? my ardor undo, in words so few, withdrew, did you, Adieu! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) clever write.... I enjoyed |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My God, well and cleverly written my friend ![]() Look in thy heart and write. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My flower, on you I am a dew, ============================== what a lovely thought ![]() love the vocab and rhyme scheme of this as well as the format/presentation... yes...clever indeed. well done sir Richard... your poetry makes me wish I spoke french ![]() jm slow burn ... |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh aren't you the clever one, I really enjoyed this cutie patootie. Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is clever!! well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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