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. . . The breath of love . . . Thank you MEM
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. . . The breath of love . . . Thank you MEM |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Inspired by MyEnchantedMelody ~*~ I will breathe you in Savor the essence of you And never exhale Finally fixed  http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
in the blue of you we shall pass by in mem'ry wishing you exhaled LOL...enjoyed! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
LOL LOL LOL ROTFL--well almost, but there's no one here right now to pick me up again. I know, I know, Lady took such a romantic statement and turned it to uproarious laughter, but I can't help it, it's funny. Interloper, your senyru is very nice, though in reality, not a very sensible thing, for then you would not have been around to enjoy your lovely one. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
and there in the heart of me you'd stay forever...alway Wonderful.......I really loved it... I believe you drew that part wonderfully. Thank you ************************ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely said Interloper... I enjoyed |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gosh, I love this senryu, it's one of the best I've ever read, it's a keeper  Melissa~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful, Love how you do this |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is a beautiful thought isn't it? Thank you for sharing this with us. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ exhale \Ex*hale"\, v. i. To rise or be given off, as vapor; to pass off, or vanish. I cannot get this huge grin off my face I just wanted you to know that I meant it would never vaporize or vanish. Virginia ~ You too See above.MEM ~ I'm so glad you are pleased. At least YOU understood the meaning Ron ~ Thank you for your comment and for not laughing Melissa ~ Gee, golly whoppers I'm honored.SEA ~ Thanx, gal Colleen ~ Thank you for your somewhat formal comment. I enjoy your stopping by. Just act like one of the family Finally fixed :) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, her poetry is very inspirational, I agree. Nicely done, sir. (Sheesh no one writes things like this for me..LOL) Sandra |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Having to laugh at some people who take things so Literally.... Cat....I bet, I bet....you've had one written by now about you, right? |
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Faust New Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 7 |
Very lovely. Nicely done. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sandra ~ /pip/Forum50/HTML/001319.html Hope you like it a little Deca ~ Now just how did you know? Gotchur crystal ball all polished up, huh? Faust ~ Welcome to Passions and I am extremely proud you made your first post to one of my poor offerings. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
I'm holding my breath |
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