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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Of all the things I have wished for in my life, but did not do my most regretted is not standing face to face with you, palm to palm hands outstretched ten of my fingertips touching nine of yours, pulling your hand close and kissing the tip that was missing… Do you still remember my friend, the time you made me guess how it became absent? And how you laughed when I guessed right and said I cheated, that you must have forgotten and told me the story before. Do you remember the laughter and how much fun we had? I know our ways have parted and yes it was hard at first, but I am finally finding my way. I just needed you to know that of all the things I have wished for in my life, but did not do, my most regretted is not standing face to face with you. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Cleansing write. Good for you  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
regrets... and this kind..... especially.. are at times hard to write about.. you found the way to here..and it is a good one too |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This poem is not what I expected when I read the title - but I'm very glad I opened it. In this world where so many of our dearest friends are across the world from us, you've written regrets I can relate to and written them very well. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Don't know if you will see this, but reminds me of a McKuen poem.(That's a compliment )Sandra |
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