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Dear Love,...Sincerely, Walt
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Dear Love,...Sincerely, Walt |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Love Dear Love, The kind they write about Is somewhere balanced above Just to hang so much ~ off my fingertips ~ that I tip toe in hope to catch a star For it seems to me that stars ~ Are the ceiling to my rapture ~ I jump and land Heavy footed Heavy hearted To appraise what slipped through here Through my hand ~ To sprinkle upon the heads Of lovers star crossed anew ~ The dust of love Shaken from the eldest root every drop was meant to hold the souls of two but it's I that reaches high as others keep their vision straight I, who strive for golden dust the root of love would grow in me ~ When I find her Her roots will be the brightest supernovas And her blossoms Will busy The honey bees Of Heaven ~ Love Dear Love, You are not a ceiling You are not a measure I know you grow Forever more For I will nurture your existence ~ As much as one soul could do ~ Love, the kind I write about When I began I only cried Now I believe in you (when I find her will she know me too?) ~ Sincerely, One in Love. [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-02-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes she will....oh you...this is simply awesome bub...you take my breath away |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I jump and land heavy footed Heavy hearted To appraise what slipped through here Through my hand Great write, Walt...I like your serious side! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Oh Walt...you make my heart sigh when you write these lovely serious poems. You are just an old romantic too aren't you??!! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
And her blossoms Will busy The honey bees Of Heaven A wonderful trip this celestial journey, just keep reaching and looking up to those stars, Walt, one is bound to fall your way! Cor |
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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
nice work walt, as always i enjoy seeing your stuff, but i dont get to see much of the seriuos walt |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ 'The dust of love Shaken from the eldest root every drop was meant to hold the souls of two but it’s I that reaches high as others keep their vision straight I, who strive for golden dust the root of love would grow in me When I find her Her roots will be the brightest supernovas And her blossoms Will busy The honey bees Of Heaven' This is just really nice~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh, sigh! Oh, my! Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys o yuh i was high on love yuh |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
BEAUTIFUL!  geesh Walty! What a treat to read today! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I, who strive for golden dust the root of love would grow in me When I find her Her roots will be the brightest supernovas And her blossoms Will busy The honey bees Of Heaven ~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is an awesome poem. The above is my favorite.  Deb |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this! It was so sincere and honest. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
O Yuh! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Nice job Walty, this has a very airy feel to it, I like it muchly "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
High on love is a wunnerful place to be, walt... Can I have a fix of whatever you're having?...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite the silver tongued poet... wonderfully done Walt...I enjoyed |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
your questions and answers from the great beyond are fantasmic this is a different dimension from you usual... and is perfect very romantic, like always. awesome i like it 'cause it aint traditional |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Is that you on Batman at Six flags? I love that ride! But I'd have to say my all time favorite is the Titan followed very closely by the Texas Giant. By the way, I also live in the metroplex. Magnificent poem. The best novel I ever read about love whose roots are "the brightest supernovas" and whose blossoms "will busy the honey bees of Heaven" is Corelli's Mandolin by Louis de Bernieres. It's about all kinds of love, and is placed on the Greek island of Cephallonia during World War II. It takes sometime to get into but is wonderful. Thanks for sharing your poem. :~) Samia |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cruz the replier above you and I have ridden the Titan 12 times and are going tomorrow to ride it all day. I here yuh on the novel but will see the movie cuz that's me. Email me if yuh ever wanna go to six flags o yuh! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
ahhhhh yeahhhhh! titan aces! |
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