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Gypsy Senryu
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Gypsy Senryu ~*~ chimes around ankles hidden by the gauze of awe shimmering skin lures ~*~ dance girl dance once more bidden by the awes that cause golden skin gleaming ~*~ gypsy girl singing veiled askance mesmerizing tingling romance ~*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely sensual... and a pleasure to read |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
jingling gypsy girl sensual movements awes all veil underscores eyes |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love the gypsy image. Something always so mysterious and sensual. You captured it well. Thank You. Sincerely, Regina |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
vivid imaging withing the parameters of the form, that is if it's like Haiku and can vary in syllabic count slightly enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ This is just lovely~ There is a magical allure in the dance of the gypsy. Greatly enjoyed~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I could hear the bells! Nicely done. Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I've actually known some Gypsy women; you describe them wonderfully! Sing while you may |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
The Gypsy dances in my mind with the chimes of freedom woven around her, the sparkle of interest in her eyes and a haze of surrounding beauty which has engulfed my imagination. Thanks for the image through your poetry. Rick |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another example of the versatility of your writing Very lovely, Lovely Lady in White Liz |
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MissGypsiNess Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 21MyWay - The HighWay |
Jingling castonets Resound mellifluently Syncopated hearts |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
all that's missing is a camp fire and a gypsy violin---thanks for taking me to the dance! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- This is wonderful! I could see her dancing..  Beautifully done. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Captain, your responses are always a delight to see...thank you... Interloper - always with the poetic reply - you spoil us!... Regina, I am glad you were able to catch the sensation, thank you... Virginia, I just now caught the error...you may bring the wet noodle... Marge, gypsies do have a way, do they not? Mysteria, I am so glad you heard the music!... Ian, it's been a while since we've seen you! Welcome home! Rick, if you saw the images, then I did it right! Thank you... Elizabeth, I have many to follow when it comes to styles...thank you!... MissGypsiNess, so glad I caught you with this...thank you... Constance, look a little closer {~,^}... Vicky, of Course you did! Thank you! |
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