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The Thunder
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The Thunder |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The Thunder My muse is starting to wonder…. Of desert moons, And the sounds of distant thunder. Is it the waking of the soul? When the colour of your eyes Is freedom like a winding country road I’ve whispered them in sleep, Names of lovers once dear in heart But it seems today, yours is all I want to speak. I’ve come to understand my gift This pen is closely connected to my soul It lives and breathes inside the lover’s wish. I hear the rain in distant lands The thunder, slowly wakes my soul In you my heart with gentle reaching hands. The thunder, yes the thunder. James Parker Haley July 29, 2001 [This message has been edited by Parker (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nice, Parker, a really good read, enjoyed the imagery..gentle smile |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Parker--You have a way of creating atmosphere ...this is good writing. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’ve come to understand my gift This pen is closely connected to my soul It lives and breathes inside the lover’s wish. I hear the rain in distant lands The thunder, slowly wakes my soul In you my heart with gentle reaching hands. ================================= My my my...look whose muse returns with a grand entrance... this is a lovely, soulful inspire P-man... a beautiful introspective piece. and its a pleasure to read you again... I can hear those S's in your "soul"  jm/b.e.g. *L* slow burn ... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey Handsome "I hear the rain in distant lands The thunder, slowly wakes my soul" ohhhh, yeah  me too.....love this keeping this "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
This is wonderful Parker. You just get better and better, don't you? Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I could hear it roll... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Logan, thank you. Martie, thank you... is that a play on words...lol. Janet, you have a thing for S's. I'll have to write something with lots to recite softly.. Sea, thanks sweety, keep me close...lol. Dee, thank you... inspiration is waking my muse, deep inside. azblond, well thank you.. Parker |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...and I've a passion for storms, myself... something about the freedom and total lack of control...lol and Thanks for the stroll of memories... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That was fantastic! Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes nicely done...a joy to read... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- I just love storms, and this one is no exception. I could almost hear the thunder.. Very nicely done. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
When one hears the thundering hooves of love rumble in.... one knows... Well done, Parker! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
this is very good |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Parker, Nice work here. Your imagery is very nice. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I just like to thank everybody for replying. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..i missed this one..! just want to say (what?--better late than never!)..this is awesome!! and i'd love to hear you softly reciting this little gem in my ear...whens a good time for you... much enjoyed, love.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ in front of total strangers will ya kiss me.. flowers for no reason but you miss me.. oh..i wanna be in love.. -etheridge [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Parker sweetie, it's been a while I seen you upon these pages blue and I still can hear you recite the words of that really special poem from a while back that is like fresh in my mind 2day... Oh, and the purpose of my reply here before I forget, is ummm to tell ya thank you for a splendid read you've given me 2nite... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oooops.....forgot to put this in my library. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sounds like the thundering of a hearbeat, Park! Cor |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh, yes, an awakening can certainly be like thunder...this is romantic and powerful enjoyed reading |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, thank you... everybody wants to hear my whispers... hey that's not all I can do.. coco, well very glad you enjoyed. Dee, do you have one of those warm libraries, lots of books... and a nice leather couch. Corinne, sweet poet thank you ... could be. Vas, thank you very much, and yes some can be very thounderous... Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Parker, Awesome writting here, very, very much enjoyed, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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