Untitled (Just rambling and thinking)

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Open Poetry #15

Untitled (Just rambling and thinking)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-07-29 02:36 PM

I don't know who to be mad at,
should it be me, or should it be you?
Why have I been so stupid
to believe that this love was true?
Have I left myself down,
for believing this was real?
My heart feels so damn cold
I just don't know what to feel.

It used to feel so full of life
and my spirit felt so free,
now it feels so lonely
deep down inside of me.
I really thought you were "the one"
now I can not believe that it's true,
do you know how much this hurts my heart~
why do I still believe in you?

Each time you let me see your heart
I see another small piece of you,
but I just don't know what is real
or what is any longer true.
These glimpses lead me to believe
that I am just NOT wrong
but damn I sure wish I knew
Is this the end or our love song?????

(Crazy for crying, and crazy for trying....
and I'm crazy for loving you....Pattsy Cline)

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 07-29-2001).]

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-07-29 08:52 PM

Ahh, Gentle One...very gentle smile..follow the gut, for it is never wrong..The heart, the mind, it will say this and that, but the gut...the innersoul you cannot fool..

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-29 08:56 PM

If the love is true, it will endure and return to you. If not, then perhaps it's better to find out now rather than later. Powerful write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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