Open Poetry #15 |
Our Own Garden Of Eden |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
In the stillness of the night I reach out for you only to grasp hold of the cold and empty sheets How I long to feel your masculine form lying next to me in the afterglow of our sweet love to hear every breath you take to respond to your sensual touch How much I want to make your happiness my responsibility and be the reason behind your smile My mind seems to have forgotten that I can only hold you in my dreams and for a moment I am alone here in the darkness of the night until I escape into my dreams where I am guided by the light of your love I enter a world where you and I thrive in our own Garden of Eden where love blooms and fluorishes all year round a place where our love is of the greatest importance and where no one or nothing can touch us Here we'll sail love's ocean drift off into the sunset and bask in the moonlight of our love as we ask ourselves - "Does it get any better than this?" Suetang |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
A sad start, but ends with such a pleasant dream. Melton |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Nope! It doesn't get any better. Romance.... Glows from your verse, even in the light of day. Beautiful! Sincerely, Regina |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...sitting here in the afterglow of a sweet read... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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