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Lost Love Lament
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Lost Love Lament |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Due to its content, this has been transferred to the Adult Poetry Forum. If you have any questions, Melissa, feel free to contact me. Denise |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
and I willingly surrender to the void of never letting go I loved so many things in this, I could have cut and posted all night. Felt every word of this! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see your face in the cream clouds of my coffee and shiver in the brush strokes over auburn strands of hair that once wrapped around the fingers of your kiss ~ ================================ You are gone a ghost of reminder engraved in my core in soothing agony a beautiful contradiction and I willingly surrender to the void of never letting go ================================ Melis...this is awesome... the imagery in this outstanding as is the ache of your emotional expresion. As I read this I was thinking...she writes well beyond her years. I hope you take that as the compliment its intended to be  (I said it to someone else on time and they thought I meant they were old) LOL impressive writing here girlie jm slow burn ... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Wow...there is so much in here that I must read it several times before I can fully appreciate it. Your imagery is amazing and it flows so smoothly....an awesome awesome write definitely a keeper!~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you JLR, Janet Marie and Krista for your generous replies, this is a poem that just needed to be released tonight~ |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
It is I who am impressed now Melissa. This one made my heart beat and my mind race, and I think we all agree emotion is the best part of sharing poetry! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Melissa, I love this poem. The emotions you so aptly describe can be felt by anyone reading this, especially if one has loved and lost. The agony of dispair and not being able to do anything about it...oh yes...you have captured these emotions perfectly. "and something inside of me died... at the thought of never again feeling your lips... screaming at fate... refusing to stretch our passion to forever... The taste of tears is all too sobering... knowing that you are in her arms... and I willingly surrender to the void of never letting go" Oh Melissa, this one brought tears to my eyes, it is so very powerful! Keep writing...you are gifted! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh My, I feel this so intensely. Again my heart is spoken by another poet. You wrote this so well, thank you. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This ache is oh to familiar to me now Melissa, and I pray that you need not suffer it for long.....but you write of it so well. Heres a big HUG for you, with wishes for joy to come your way soon. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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