Open Poetry #15 |
Anybody Knows That Nobody Cares |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I prolly shouldn't have written this poem for it exploits a lil game my family and my friend all play together. Marge in another poem replied to me saying that it was kinda like Abbott and Costello. We play a game where we trade in our normal names and titles for these: Mom= somebody, you Dad= nobody, me Friend= anybody, I Son= who, him now cipher the poem if you will (i know there are lotta other poems that just need readin (and ponderin) but go ahead it be fun) I think I love you And that's what makes me mad Nobody cares That Mom loves Dad There's somebody behind you Well that just can't be For if there's someone behind you It's probably me Who dunnit! You keep on saying I told you who dunnit! Why is he playing? Somebody loves you What a conceit Anybody out there Who needs to compete? It's just you and me babe I'm not even here And if we should see him We can both disappear We like to play our little game Anybody, Me, Somebody, Who Where it can be a good thing to say That nobody would ever love you |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I LOVE IT!! And I'm sure if you let Anybody and Nobody read it, they will love it too! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh shades of who's on first! I love it! This is great! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
it hurts my head but now I understand walt |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
while gasping for air and lol for an obvious and apparent reason i say, "imthabaddest but nobody cares." que tan perfecto Guido! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ TOO FUN ! What delight you must have in being YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This explains so much Walt!!! LMAO...wonderful!!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Anybody.. um.. everybody... um... I like this... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL I love this walt!!! I'll have to try it someday. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Walt, I forgot to go to bed last night, and here I sit a 4:15am my time deciphering your poem. Hey I got it, shows I'm better at reading your stuff when I'm bleary eyed. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
but remember, walt, i did not say that |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Walt! Such fun! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Walt, who did you say you were again? Much enjoyed!! |
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