........He Is There......repost, revised

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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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0 posted 2001-07-12 12:08 PM

He is There

Just a dream, surreal, all mine
A love for life, forever in time
All of him would not come to me
Only parts of him could I see
But, he was all to me
This loving man in my reverie

Could feel him stand by me in dream
Sometimes a touch, light as cream
Feel his laugh upon the wind
Or know his presence, turn, and then
Be dismayed, it was only another
Never the full of him, never my lover

O now, no longer just a dream
No, he is all that I’ve ever seen
He is all I have heard on the breeze
He says he’s mine ~ oh sweet release!
I see all features, they are so fine
His charming eyes hold steady mine

We have not yet touched, yet I feel his skin
Beneath my fingers, ‘tis dream, ‘tis whim
I feel his lips take in all my passion
This coming together, so long imagined
He is the mate that God hath made for me
In his sweet loving I have come to be

For I was nothing but partial shell, living
Then he fulfilled with impassioned giving
In this share of devotion, we are as one
To revel in life, to outshine all suns
As back to earth we fall, in tender delight
Remaining entwined throughout our nights

He is now no longer a dream,
This man of my within
Come to take me to him,
Our eternity to begin.

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2001-07-12 01:07 PM

I just love this.......all of it, everything about this is so fantastic

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

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2 posted 2001-07-12 01:23 PM

aw, sweet union a wondrous, blessed thing

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-12 01:51 PM

very nicely done... I will echo.. i like everything about it

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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4 posted 2001-07-12 02:33 PM

We have not yet touched, yet I feel his skin
Beneath my fingers, ‘tis dream, ‘tis whim
I feel his lips take in all my passion
This coming together, so long imagined
He is the mate that God hath made for me
In his sweet loving I have come to be

For I was nothing but partial shell, living
Then he fulfilled with impassioned giving
In this share of devotion, we are as one
To revel in life, to outshine all suns
As back to earth we fall, in tender delight
Remaining entwined throughout our nights
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what an enchanting lovely write...
so romantic and written with a delicate passion.
wonderful poem of devotion and anticipation of things to come.
lovely m'lady
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Auguste

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By the sea

5 posted 2001-07-13 03:11 AM

You are a poet!!!

Loved it!

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

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6 posted 2001-07-13 05:11 AM

I know someone else who would appreciate this as much as I do. I enjoyed this!

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2001-07-13 01:05 PM

A tenderly written poem of a most fairy tale like encounter with love that seems to defy the imagination....... when your art became real life. And may you and yours live happily everafter in this your reality where dreams do come true. Dreamy.

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

8 posted 2001-07-13 01:23 PM

Beautiful, I loved it, yes, dreams do come true!!!

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Fear only standing still.

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