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I Believe |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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I believe in angels and miracles Of things felt that can’t be seen I believe the day we die Is when we give up on our dreams I believe the sky has diamonds That sparkle in the night I believe you shouldn’t sleep Without making up after a fight I believe in one true love But also in falling in love again I believe the past is repeated If we don’t remember when I believe in fairy tales In soul mates and true bliss I believe two souls can bond By sharing a passionate kiss I believe the world is good As long as you don’t deceive That hope is eternal, and life worth living As long as you always believe. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well expressed with great flow, I believe in many of these too  I do enjoy the style of your writing~However, I do have a suggestion, it's best that you only post at most 2 poems a night, it's sort of an unwritten rule here at Passions. Also, this way you'll notice that you'll receive more replies and your poems won't get lost at the bottom as fast... Melissa~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I believe you've penned the important things in life. I especially believe ...I believe in one true love But also in falling in love again... Good points throughout. Melton |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Here's to holding all you believe, worthy thoughts we all one time concieve, that naught will happen to these lines bereave, and always quick your heart retreive. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Nicely written, it flows well and I believe much the same as you. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I am so glad to see I am not the only one out there who still does...believe! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I believe you're onto something... I'm still trying to grasp the segue from believing to knowing... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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