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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2001-07-28 10:20 PM



A Suitor's Reply
~*~

A suitor's  reply fascinates
captivated in a soft easy chair
mellow as a sweet summer breeze
rapture is no longer lost in a gentle tease
beloved,
the color of love is you  

~*~
BloomingRose

© Copyright 2001 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2001-07-28 10:26 PM


Now this is beautiful! I loved the combination of poetry and graphic, and the overall feeling of this was so romantic!!
Nice writing, my friend!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-07-28 10:31 PM


She looks happy and this a very romantic poem, I enjoyed.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2001-07-29 03:36 PM


Sunny~ Thank you kind friend.  

Shadow~ Yes, she does look a bit happy.  
Thanks for reading.

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2001-09-01 11:39 PM



Deb-
   How did you sneak this one past me?
   This is lovely, and so softly penned.  
   Nicely done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-01-2001).]

The Rusty Knight
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5 posted 2001-09-01 11:50 PM


It is a gift to paint such a lovely picture with so few strokes of the pen.....soft, romantic and leaving the door open for the mind to enter.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-09-02 12:24 PM


BloomingRose~
My ... just lovely~
You do such nice pieces to touch the heart~

*I missed this before - but it's Vicky's fault ! !  
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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